Friday 31 May 2013

I still haven't arrived on a suitable title for this poem.. it got me a whole 1 and half hour( i guess) to complete this. so here it goes..

was i that naive
that the deception was not enough
and my heart had to break into countless pieces?

was i that blind
when your promising eyes
allured me, i failed
to see the hatred in them?

was i that deluded
that your truthful lies
were the beautiful things
i loved to believe in?

was i that deprived
that your fake love
was all i wanted
in the story of my life?

the painful blows
showered by your masquerade
were veiled by love
and tethered with false faith

till the truth dawned, unveiling
the impact of your blows
- shattering they were
and got me suffering all way along!


2 comments:

  1. awsum ! n dnt keep ne title fr dis

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  2. ty.. bt a poem shud always hv a title.. can u suggest one?

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